| Title: Chapter 25
| 26 Apr 2022 7:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you as ever Dumbledore ties Severus in knots of linguistic interpretation
Great chapter, with a very gripping ending! I’m looking forward to seeing how your version of events unfolds.
I like how you put your on spin on this.
Excellently done emotional ending there. I hope it hits Severus in the heart.
| Title: Chapter 24
| 17 Apr 2022 8:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good blend of cannon and your story, thank you
| Title: Chapter 23
| 17 Apr 2022 8:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh dear, poor Harry, he never gets a break. Thank you a good chapter
I’ve been following this story from the start and I always get so excited when I see that you’ve updated! The way you leave each chapter on cliffhanger is so painfully good! you leave me eagerly waiting for the next one. I’m very excited to see what you have in store for Harry and the rest of the trio down the trapdoor and whether they’ll be followed by a certain potions master. Great chapter!
NOOOOOO, Harry! Don’t be stupid please… (growling inwardly for a thousand times)
Anyway, great chapter! I’m hoping to see what might come next!
Finally opened an account here!Great chapter as per usual, for some reason the part where Snape turned away made me feel a bit sad for both of them, really like how you write the dynamics between Harry and the professor, I look forward to the next chapter, keep up the good work!
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