| Title: A Desolate Prelude and an Auspicious Conclusion
| 06 Jan 2022 8:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a sad tale with a happy ending
| Title: A Desolate Prelude and an Auspicious Conclusion
| 03 Jan 2022 12:18 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Thanks for your story! Snaps was frightening, indeed.
| Title: A Desolate Prelude and an Auspicious Conclusion
| 03 Jan 2022 9:54 am
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| Reviewer: Handa (Signed)
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This was really great! I wish it was longer!
| Title: A Desolate Prelude and an Auspicious Conclusion
| 03 Jan 2022 3:39 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Very powerful. Snape was very scary in this story, threatening Harry. Wow! I’m so glad he stopped and realized Harry was actually hyperventilating.
I bet Snape feels guilty.
There was one typo, after Harry tells Snape about his Uncle, Snape then calls him “Your father” instead of your Uncle.
Poor Ron having to be disciplined by McGonagall later. So his wrist is broken but he is still worried about Harry. He’s such a good friend. You did a great job expressing Ron in the short time he was present in the story.
Thanks for writing and sharing!
Author's Response: oop! thanks! forgot to fix it.
Tysm for the review!!! Yeah, I had some pretty scary teachers IRL. Once my science teacher threatened to throw a shoe at these 2 girls who wouldn't stop talking! It was kind of funny but she seriously took off her sneaker.
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