| Title: Chapter 9
| 23 Feb 2022 5:44 pm
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Thank you so much for this interesting and original story. I especially loved the last part and learning about how Sev in his world dealt with Voldemort thanks to Harry
| Title: Chapter 8
| 23 Feb 2022 5:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely scene when they find the body thank you
| Title: Chapter 7
| 23 Feb 2022 5:15 pm
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Lovely scene with the deer, thank you
| Title: Chapter 6
| 22 Feb 2022 10:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good conversation between them, thank you
| Title: Chapter 5
| 22 Feb 2022 10:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very interesting ideas you have about the different realities
| Title: Chapter 4
| 22 Feb 2022 7:13 pm
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Thank you I love it when Severus has to change his mind about Harry.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 22 Feb 2022 7:03 pm
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A good chapter, towards the end I got a bit confused about who was talking and thinking.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 22 Feb 2022 6:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you. Ron is a typical “foot in mouth” person. I love your Harry, he is a wonderfully kind character.
Author's Response: Thank you. I've seen plenty of bad portrayals of him where he betrays Harry's trust or upsets him in some way of letting his hatred of Snape get in the way. I guess I generally see the good in most characters with a few exceptions, I see Ron I guess as letting his temper get in the way and speaking insensitively before thinking or taking the chance to reevaluate someone more than him just being a nasty person and a bully but at the same time, he did fill the job of upsetting Sev and indeed Harry quite well. Yes, love the relationship between them, Harry is really embracing the supportive big brother role
| Title: Chapter 1
| 22 Feb 2022 6:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely start to the story.
Thanks for the nice story. It was interesting, and I enjoyed getting to know little Sev!
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it, I enjoyed writing him and Harry, my first proper story and still one of my favourites. Apologies if my responses got a bit muddled!
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