| Title: Chapter 2
| 22 Feb 2022 6:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you. Ron is a typical “foot in mouth” person. I love your Harry, he is a wonderfully kind character.
Author's Response: Thank you. I've seen plenty of bad portrayals of him where he betrays Harry's trust or upsets him in some way of letting his hatred of Snape get in the way. I guess I generally see the good in most characters with a few exceptions, I see Ron I guess as letting his temper get in the way and speaking insensitively before thinking or taking the chance to reevaluate someone more than him just being a nasty person and a bully but at the same time, he did fill the job of upsetting Sev and indeed Harry quite well. Yes, love the relationship between them, Harry is really embracing the supportive big brother role
Very touching that Harry would use his father’s cloak to protect young Sev, the very boy his father bullied. Nicely done, thank you.
Author's Response: That's a good point, I'll admit that I was mainly thinking that using it would save him all the attention and trauma of being discovered by everyone in the common room plus the fact that it must be an amazing experience for Sev but that's a good point what goes around comes around, Harry's truly taking this chance and making amends for everything his father did even if he can't change his Professor's life he's helping his younger self out
What a lovely description of the cloak through Sev’s eyes.
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