| Title: Chapter 5 A change of plans
| 30 May 2022 2:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Wait, lower the wards? This is a new idea. I’m glad the Malfoys did as Snape suggested. Draco must be very confused.
I hope Snape manages to get Harry free when the time comes.
I’m enjoying the pace of this story. It is interesting and moving swiftly. I did notice that the writing is getting better. The tenses still change though. They need to match throughout. You seem to write in the present tense, but sometimes a past tense is used.
Well I am glad that Snape and Harry are still safe, and not caught. I am enjoying this story.
| Title: Chapter 5 A change of plans
| 24 Apr 2022 9:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very dramatic, I loved the ending very clever thank you
| Title: Chapter 5 A change of plans
| 24 Apr 2022 12:21 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Very interesting. Events are moving quickly!
Oooooooo…. What will happen next?
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