Love the chapter ended!! Wonderful job!!
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you liked it
| Title: Chapter 14
| 11 Jul 2022 8:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the baby hatching and Severus’s portrait thank you
Author's Response: Thanks, phew good to hear, I hate writing conversations, it's not my strong point
Thanks for the enjoyable chapter. I liked the symbolism of rebirth with the phoenix.
Author's Response: Thanks, yes it's a powerful symbol of rebirth and the fact that Severus is cleansed of the darkness that hung over him, he is pure and has a fresh start
Lovely meeting with Teddy. It was nice to see Harry handling Sev’s insecurities with compassion.
Author's Response: Thanks, yes, he's still got a way to go but Harry's certainly helping him and it helps that they've had somewhat similar experiences growing up
| Title: Chapter 12
| 05 Jul 2022 1:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh dear I don’t think I’d take Hagrid’s choice but it will be fun. Loved the meeting with Teddy. Thank you
Author's Response: Thanks, I think you'll be pleasantly surprised when I get to writing and posting it although I understand why you'd think that. A reviewer suggested it a few chapters back and I thought it was such a good suggestion that I'd have to include it later in the story
Thanks for the great introduction of Sev to the Weasleys. It was a really nice chapter. I like your note about pairings, and think you’re spot on.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it and liked my notes on pairings, it's not an easy thing to do right
| Title: Chapter 10
| 28 Jun 2022 9:05 pm
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I think I reviewed this chapter already
| Title: Chapter 10
| 28 Jun 2022 9:03 pm
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I think you got Ron completely right. He has a tender heart, I’m thinking of the ministry scenes in Deathly Hallows, but he can be jealous and thoughtless. I think JK took the easy way out with Ginny and Harry and I think the pairing of Ron and Hermione just wrong.
Thank you for a wonderful chapter, I’m glad Hermione is going to be main mother figure.
Author's Response: Thanks, yeah he's certainly got the fiery temper that people sometimes associate with redheads, he allows his prejudices to colour his opinions and speaks first and thinks later, he can be jealous and very defensive of his friends to the point of upsetting others but he's overall still a good person. I agree that I don't like pairings it seems like the lazy option that since they're the main three plus Ginny who already has had a crush on Harry they should be pairings, particularly Ron and Hermione, maybe I'm the one who's mistaken but I think there's opposites attract and then there's just too much extremes where they'd quickly drive each other up the wall
Enjoyable chapter, thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed it
Awesome!
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