Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 14 25 Aug 2022 4:52 pm
Reviewer: Pug Mom 10 (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the chapter ended!! Wonderful job!!

    Author's Response: Thank you, glad you liked it
Title: Chapter 14 11 Jul 2022 8:49 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the baby hatching and Severus’s portrait thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks, phew good to hear, I hate writing conversations, it's not my strong point
Title: Chapter 14 09 Jul 2022 12:45 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the enjoyable chapter. I liked the symbolism of rebirth with the phoenix.

    Author's Response: Thanks, yes it's a powerful symbol of rebirth and the fact that Severus is cleansed of the darkness that hung over him, he is pure and has a fresh start
Title: Chapter 12 09 Jul 2022 12:36 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely meeting with Teddy. It was nice to see Harry handling Sev’s insecurities with compassion.

    Author's Response: Thanks, yes, he's still got a way to go but Harry's certainly helping him and it helps that they've had somewhat similar experiences growing up
Title: Chapter 12 05 Jul 2022 1:26 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear I don’t think I’d take Hagrid’s choice but it will be fun. Loved the meeting with Teddy. Thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks, I think you'll be pleasantly surprised when I get to writing and posting it although I understand why you'd think that. A reviewer suggested it a few chapters back and I thought it was such a good suggestion that I'd have to include it later in the story
Title: Chapter 10 01 Jul 2022 1:23 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the great introduction of Sev to the Weasleys. It was a really nice chapter. I like your note about pairings, and think you’re spot on.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it and liked my notes on pairings, it's not an easy thing to do right
Title: Chapter 10 28 Jun 2022 9:05 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I think I reviewed this chapter already
Title: Chapter 10 28 Jun 2022 9:03 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I think you got Ron completely right. He has a tender heart, I’m thinking of the ministry scenes in Deathly Hallows, but he can be jealous and thoughtless. I think JK took the easy way out with Ginny and Harry and I think the pairing of Ron and Hermione just wrong.
    Thank you for a wonderful chapter, I’m glad Hermione is going to be main mother figure.

    Author's Response: Thanks, yeah he's certainly got the fiery temper that people sometimes associate with redheads, he allows his prejudices to colour his opinions and speaks first and thinks later, he can be jealous and very defensive of his friends to the point of upsetting others but he's overall still a good person. I agree that I don't like pairings it seems like the lazy option that since they're the main three plus Ginny who already has had a crush on Harry they should be pairings, particularly Ron and Hermione, maybe I'm the one who's mistaken but I think there's opposites attract and then there's just too much extremes where they'd quickly drive each other up the wall
Title: Chapter 9 24 Jun 2022 2:24 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Enjoyable chapter, thank you!

    Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed it
Title: Chapter 9 22 Jun 2022 12:15 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]

    Author's Response: Thank you

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