| Title: Chapter 7
| 13 Jun 2022 7:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely chapter, I think you portrayed Neville’s uncertainties very well. It must be hard for him to have all his memories of the last year as well as his time in potions to overcome. He is like Harry a kind forgiving child.
I love Luna and her pronouncements are always good and you have her so well. Thank you
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really glad you liked my portrayal of Neville and of Luna, I did find her more challenging to portray her. I think Neville comes around quickly listening to Harry and realises that Severus is nothing like the man who intimidated and bullied him for the past seven years, it may take longer but I think he'll come to see that Professor Snape was also not all he seemed
Thanks for the sweet chapter. That was a nice healing moment with Neville. The plot thickened at the end and, while I think I understand what’s happening with the dreams, I’m looking forward to finding out for sure in the chapters ahead.
Author's Response: Thank you. glad you liked Severuis and Neville starting over, he's nott he ost obvious character to include but I think he's a good choice. I won't say anything more about the dreams otherwise I'm likely to give away the plot away with unsubtle hints but all will be revealed soon, the next chapter's kind of setting up for it so hope it doesn't disappoint.
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