I have been reading your fic since yesterday, and I'm really liking small Severus. Really glad to learn Harry might not go back with Ginny. I noticed, however, that chapter 11 did not exist. There are two chapter 10 and then it's straight to chapter 12.
Looking forward to be able to read chapter 11!
Thanks for the great introduction of Sev to the Weasleys. It was a really nice chapter. I like your note about pairings, and think you’re spot on.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it and liked my notes on pairings, it's not an easy thing to do right
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| 28 Jun 2022 9:05 pm
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I think I reviewed this chapter already
| Title: Chapter 10
| 28 Jun 2022 9:03 pm
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I think you got Ron completely right. He has a tender heart, I’m thinking of the ministry scenes in Deathly Hallows, but he can be jealous and thoughtless. I think JK took the easy way out with Ginny and Harry and I think the pairing of Ron and Hermione just wrong.
Thank you for a wonderful chapter, I’m glad Hermione is going to be main mother figure.
Author's Response: Thanks, yeah he's certainly got the fiery temper that people sometimes associate with redheads, he allows his prejudices to colour his opinions and speaks first and thinks later, he can be jealous and very defensive of his friends to the point of upsetting others but he's overall still a good person. I agree that I don't like pairings it seems like the lazy option that since they're the main three plus Ginny who already has had a crush on Harry they should be pairings, particularly Ron and Hermione, maybe I'm the one who's mistaken but I think there's opposites attract and then there's just too much extremes where they'd quickly drive each other up the wall
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