I did like it. Poor harry.
| Title: Bright Green Eyes and Little White Lines
| 30 May 2022 6:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Excellent writing thank you. I particularly liked the ending, it was pure Harry.
Author's Response: hehe I was mighty proud of that ending myself, thank you!
| Title: Bright Green Eyes and Little White Lines
| 30 May 2022 4:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Cute oneshot. Alternating meekness and snarkiness is an intruiging characterization of Harry.
I like how Snape shared his own scars with Harry. I bet Snape does grow to like Harry eventually.
Good story. Thanks so much for writing and sharing it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Jan!!
| Title: Bright Green Eyes and Little White Lines
| 28 May 2022 3:14 pm
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| Reviewer: x_cope2006 (Signed)
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I loved
Author's Response: I'm so glad!!
Beautifully done.
Author's Response: thank you!
| Title: Bright Green Eyes and Little White Lines
| 27 May 2022 11:20 pm
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| Reviewer: uselessace1 (Signed)
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I really liked this! the change in dynamic between Harry and Snape was almost refreshing in a way, and the dialogue was witty and sarcastic (typical Slytherins). also, I appreciate that Snape keeps up with his Slytherins when they aren't doing too well.
Author's Response: thank you!!
| Title: Bright Green Eyes and Little White Lines
| 27 May 2022 4:26 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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It turned out great! I loved the slightly harsher tone of it all. It’s a tough topic to productively confront someone on, and I think Snape handled it well for a first conversation. I also appreciated how Harry alternated between aggressive and cowed. Really nice short story.
Author's Response: thank you so much!!
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