Thanks for the update. This definitely has a dark bent to it. I’m looking forward to seeing if Harry let’s his mask slip to Severus.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Oh it sure has more than just a tiny bit of darkness. About the mask slipping...hmm...will Harry let his mask slip or will he make Severus' mask slip? Let's see.
Title: Speech and Scar
| 05 Sep 2022 1:06 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Well written but perhaps check choice of words, for example you said conceit when I think you meant conceal. Liked the story and your very different Harry. Thank you
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback. Although I must admit it to you, that I meant conceit. Harry does take a lot of pride(narcissistic level) in his powers. Considering the fact that they're powers which are extremely rare(I won't give away much, coz there's no fun in that), he is conceited about them.
I'm interested in seeing how Harry is different. And why. But also to see how everything will go on.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words💖
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