| Title: Chapter 23 A Somewhat Troubled Ending
| 10 Dec 2022 12:01 pm
|
| Reviewer: Buchling (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Wait, what!? This cannot be the end. It just cant. What about Harrys depression and anxieties, what about Snapes obliviated past, what about Ginnys denial, what about Farrow. You touched so many topics here of the ethical, philosophical and psychological kind, that it is maddening to leave it so open. Your writing is superb. You describe the various characters without passing judgment and therefore make it even more amazing to read. However now that you have opened up all these topics and questions it is nothing short of low-down to leave it so elusive.
| Title: Chapter 23 A Somewhat Troubled Ending
| 29 Nov 2022 7:29 pm
|
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Poor Harry, I don’t think his problems are over. Thank you for completing the story, it has been so well written and interesting.
| Title: Chapter 23 A Somewhat Troubled Ending
| 29 Nov 2022 7:29 pm
|
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Poor Harry, I don’t think his problems are over. Thank you for completing the story, it has been so well written and interesting.
| Title: Chapter 22 Familiarity?
| 28 Nov 2022 10:01 pm
|
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Thank you, a healing chapter for them both I think
| Title: Chapter 23 A Somewhat Troubled Ending
| 28 Nov 2022 3:45 am
|
| Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Not a very satisfying ending for me. I was hoping for a more positive outcome.
| Title: Chapter 23 A Somewhat Troubled Ending
| 27 Nov 2022 10:08 pm
|
| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
I'm sorry this story is so open-ended. I hope you are writing a sequel. Why is Harry so drawn to Ginny when she has obviously pulled away? Snape could give him lessons on what that could lead to. I liked the birthday present Minerva and Harry gave to Severus.
| Title: Chapter 21 Azcaban
| 20 Nov 2022 9:38 pm
|
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
I love their verbal sparring between the two of them, a shock that Hermione is pregnant already but I can see how it raises the angst level
Thank you for updating
| Title: Chapter 20 Farrow
| 12 Nov 2022 8:37 pm
|
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Very confusing but an excellent chapter thank you
I liked how you portrayed Harry's stream of consciousness. Interesting idea of what Severus was defending to Lily - something he should be ashamed of.
Author's Response: Thank you! It was a strange chapter to write, and I realise it must be because it's exactly like you say - a stream of consciousness. It was easy to write the long draft, but I have worked on it quite a bit afterwards, so that it would make sense and not be too incoherent for others to read...
| Title: Chapter 19 Angst
| 06 Nov 2022 4:44 pm
|
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Lovely long chapter with so much angst. I love Mrs Steadfast a lovely OC character and obviously having a complicated relationship with Severus. I hope he and Harry have a better understanding now. Thank you for your regular updates.
Author's Response: I'm so pleased that you like Mrs Steadfast! She's a favorite of mine, obviously, and I think that it is very healthy for Snape that she is around. She is less complicated than he is, however, and we'll just have to see how their relationship might evolve.
|