I liked how you portrayed Harry's stream of consciousness. Interesting idea of what Severus was defending to Lily - something he should be ashamed of.
Author's Response: Thank you! It was a strange chapter to write, and I realise it must be because it's exactly like you say - a stream of consciousness. It was easy to write the long draft, but I have worked on it quite a bit afterwards, so that it would make sense and not be too incoherent for others to read...
Title: Chapter 19 Angst
| 06 Nov 2022 4:44 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely long chapter with so much angst. I love Mrs Steadfast a lovely OC character and obviously having a complicated relationship with Severus. I hope he and Harry have a better understanding now. Thank you for your regular updates.
Author's Response: I'm so pleased that you like Mrs Steadfast! She's a favorite of mine, obviously, and I think that it is very healthy for Snape that she is around. She is less complicated than he is, however, and we'll just have to see how their relationship might evolve.
Loved this angsty chapter. It seems than Snape and Harry seem to anger and then avoid each other until the other has to be there for them in some sort of way. I'd like to find out more about the story with the second cousin - it sounds like there's more to it.
Author's Response: There might be more to it, yes...Thank you for reviewing!
i loved it!
Author's Response: So glad that you did!
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