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Reviews For Spiral of Despair
Title: Chapter 23 A Somewhat Troubled Ending 10 Dec 2022 12:01 pm
Reviewer: Buchling (Signed) [Report This]
    Wait, what!? This cannot be the end. It just cant. What about Harrys depression and anxieties, what about Snapes obliviated past, what about Ginnys denial, what about Farrow. You touched so many topics here of the ethical, philosophical and psychological kind, that it is maddening to leave it so open. Your writing is superb. You describe the various characters without passing judgment and therefore make it even more amazing to read. However now that you have opened up all these topics and questions it is nothing short of low-down to leave it so elusive.
Title: Chapter 23 A Somewhat Troubled Ending 29 Nov 2022 7:29 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, I don’t think his problems are over. Thank you for completing the story, it has been so well written and interesting.
Title: Chapter 23 A Somewhat Troubled Ending 29 Nov 2022 7:29 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, I don’t think his problems are over. Thank you for completing the story, it has been so well written and interesting.
Title: Chapter 23 A Somewhat Troubled Ending 28 Nov 2022 3:45 am
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    Not a very satisfying ending for me. I was hoping for a more positive outcome.
Title: Chapter 23 A Somewhat Troubled Ending 27 Nov 2022 10:08 pm
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm sorry this story is so open-ended. I hope you are writing a sequel. Why is Harry so drawn to Ginny when she has obviously pulled away? Snape could give him lessons on what that could lead to. I liked the birthday present Minerva and Harry gave to Severus.

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