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Title: A new begining 14 Aug 2023 11:16 am
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    So good to read this again.
Title: A new begining 02 Oct 2022 8:18 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely scenes of grief and healing thank you
Title: A new begining 02 Oct 2022 8:52 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, what a wonderful glimpse of what could have been. I really like that both Snape and Remus are still alive. They both can help Harry probably more than anyone else. I am intrigued with the new mind connection Harry and Snape have now.

    What a wonderful one-shot. it had the perfect mood, great descriptions, and everyone was in character. Thanks so much for writing it and sharing it with us!

    I noticed a couple of things to fix:

    The former potion's professor then started to lightly doze again. All the energy was fading from his body. Remus gave the man a sad slime.

    Remus gave the man a sad smile.

    Just as Arthur began to push Harry's char back, the worn werewolf work in his chair.

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    woke in his chair.

    Arthur sat on the edge of Harry's bed to get more on the other man's level. "Why don't you come back to the Burrow with us? Remus, Arthur waved at the man who was watching the interaction with interest, offered for Harry to go stay with him. I think it would be good for him to be out of the public eye for a bit. And I think it would be good for you to be around others who can help you. At least while you recover."

    Remus," Arthur waved at the man who was watching the interaction with interest, "Offered for Harry to go stay with him.

    Once again, great story! I was so happy to see a new one by you. :)

    Author's Response: Ah thank you! Sometimes my fingers type faster than my brain can process! I think I have a few more one shots up my sleeve, we shall see :)
Title: A new begining 01 Oct 2022 7:00 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely.
Title: A new begining 01 Oct 2022 4:56 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the nice story!

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