Hmm... Wondering where Hedwig is...and if Snape will allow her to stay with Harry. It's a weird parallel between Vernon and Snape: each is out for himself instead of genuinely wanting to help Harry. Poor Harry is caught in the middle of -- well, not TUG-of-war -- a pushing contest, where each man is trying to push Harry AWAY!!! At least Petunia and Dudley can understand the reality of the situation, so I'm also wondering if that will change their attitude/relationship to Harry.
Oh this is too good. Haha Snape actually changed his mind and decided himself to take on Harry. I was expecting Dumbledore to force him to do it. But I rather like Snape doing it of his own accord.
It's cool that Dudley gets to see Harry as sort of cool. He actually seems decent in this story.
What a wonderful portrayal of the Dursleys. Fabuous story so far. Thank you so much for writing and sharing it!
This was such a well done and starkly pivotal chapter. I loved Snape’s ruminations and the whole setting you created around him as he was thinking. The picture of Camden Alley was a lovely addition. It was compelling how the two different portrayals of Vernon merged at the chapter’s end. Thanks for a terrific read.
Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.