I like the haggling in this chapter, and I like each time you describe the mastery work with foraging or preparation of ingredients, its lovely world building
I don’t normally write reviews. But I like this story and I wanted to point out that your price for the mushrooms doesn’t make much sense. Snape said to not accept anything less than 1 galleon and 40 sickles. But that would be 3 galleons and 6 sickles (way more than his estimated 2 galleons) and a dumb way to say it. As there are 17 sickles to a galleon. Same way as saying 1 Dollar and 234 cents.
Title: The Potions Apprentice
| 06 Nov 2022 10:16 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very interesting information about mushrooms, I’m too frightened to pick any! Thank you for updating
I’m loving the mushroom detail in this, as well as the prickly relationship between Harry and Snape. Definitely looking forward to more.
Title: The Potions Apprentice
| 05 Nov 2022 10:51 am
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Reviewer: Xicheng (Signed)
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Amo esta obra, recién la comencé hoy y ya me he leído todos sus capítulos. 😊
This was a super enjoyable chapter. I loved the mushroom hunting in the highlands, and seeing Harry’s knowledge grow so rapidly through experience. The interactions with the apothecary and the whole sun-culture Harry’s being exposed to is thoroughly fascinating. Thanks, as ever, for a unique and lovely read.
Enjoyable story. Snape and Harry are definitely in character.
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