I love the ghost story for halloween. Soren and Edric are fun as well. You havent mentioned Sirius in this, Id have expected harry to have thought about him at some point, but it does mean we focus more on harry and snape. I guess harry hasnt seen sirius in a good while too
I love the ghost story for halloween. Soren and Edric are fun as well. You havent mentioned Sirius in this, Id have expected harry to have thought about him at some point, but it does mean we focus more on harry and snape. I guess harry hasnt seen sirius in a good while too
Meant to review this back on the 19th, but this was an excellent read to come across on my birthday. I can't wait to see how this story expands!
Title: Shades Of Night
| 22 Nov 2022 9:38 am
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A lovely fun chapter I can see why you stayed up writing this one. I loved the haunted cabin and the reason they were there, what an imagination you have! Thank you for the information, it explains why Severus is relaxed in comparison to cannon if he is not going to Voldemort so readily.
Title: Shades Of Night
| 21 Nov 2022 11:43 pm
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Reviewer: Shell (Signed)
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I really enjoyed this part of the story. I I’m glad Harry got to collect ghost poop and that he enjoyed it!😁
Title: Shades Of Night
| 21 Nov 2022 11:43 pm
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Reviewer: Shell (Signed)
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I really enjoyed this part of the story. I I’m glad Harry got to collect ghost poop and that he enjoyed it!😁
Title: Shades Of Night
| 21 Nov 2022 11:43 pm
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Reviewer: Shell (Signed)
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I really enjoyed this part of the story. I I’m glad Harry got to collect ghost poop and that he enjoyed it!😁
What a cool experience for Harry! That was so much fun to read. The whole thing was intriguing and unique. Writing this chapter into the wee hours of the morning must have been good inspiration for the scene. I hope that Harry gets hooked on potions through experiences like this, and his other collecting experience. I’m really enjoying your story. Thanks for this super fun update!
Ah, so I've finally hit the latest installment after binge reading! I'm glad to see this is recent so I'm hopeful to come back for more soon! Some of the classwork/brewing is too detailed for me, so I skip it too get the main plot. But overall I'm enjoying this. And maybe if I read only one chapter a day the detail would be fine. It's hard to get thru it your binge reading, lol!
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