To start, I wish we knew something about how arla got on at school- even if its only which house she got into!
I like the system in the takeaway, its a nice touch.
The way we see ron acting like ron even when its trhough snapes perspective is great.
And you handle snape finding out neatly too
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| 08 Dec 2022 5:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A fantastic chapter, I love Mrs. Clarke, I hope we see more of her in the story. Harry was so resourceful in a difficult situation and I think Severus sees this. I love the takeaway idea for meals such a good idea. Thank you for updating
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| 08 Dec 2022 12:03 am
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I really like the librarian in this story. I am so glad that she was there for Harry. I also like that the people on Snape’s Street are looking out for Harry.
Finally, Snape is getting with the program! I can’t wait to see what happens next.
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| 08 Dec 2022 12:03 am
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I really like the librarian in this story. I am so glad that she was there for Harry. I also like that the people on Snape’s Street are looking out for Harry.
Finally, Snape is getting with the program! I can’t wait to see what happens next.
I liked how Harry is finally realizing how much Snape is doing for him. Nice community that takes care not only its own but also muggles, and I'm glad Snape participates. Snape faces an interesting dilemma - hopefully it will occur to him to ask Harry what he wants.
I liked how Harry is finally realizing how much Snape is doing for him. Nice community that takes care not only its own but also muggles, and I'm glad Snape participates. Snape faces an interesting dilemma - hopefully it will occur to him to ask Harry what he wants.
I liked how Harry is finally realizing how much Snape is doing for him. Nice community that takes care not only its own but also muggles, and I'm glad Snape participates. Snape faces an interesting dilemma - hopefully it will occur to him to ask Harry what he wants.
I liked how Harry is finally realizing how much Snape is doing for him. Nice community that takes care not only its own but also muggles, and I'm glad Snape participates. Snape faces an interesting dilemma - hopefully it will occur to him to ask Harry what he wants.
Ok, so all of these chapters have been amazing, and they just kept getting better with each one being released - but this one.. this is my favorite by far.
I love that Severus is FINALLY seeing the light and now maybe Harry can get the help he so desperate needs and deserves. Also, I love the librarian, she's a sweetheart. I'm so glad she saw what was going on and was able to help him to safety.
Loved this chapter. I especially like that the librarian is a heroine. My mom was a librarian.
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