Nice chapter given the content is mostly harry getting in trouble and upsetting people. Everyone on his side shows their support in little ways though. Its interesting how removed dumbledore is in this- he only has a couple of appearances.
I like Draco’s peripheral role in this
Nice chapter given the content is mostly harry getting in trouble and upsetting people. Everyone on his side shows their support in little ways though. Its interesting how removed dumbledore is in this- he only has a couple of appearances.
I like Draco’s peripheral role in this
| Title: Mr. Diggory, The Quill, And Severus Snape
| 30 Dec 2022 2:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Way to go Harry! Lovely way to stop Umbridge. Thank you for updating
| Title: Mr. Diggory, The Quill, And Severus Snape
| 10 Dec 2022 6:14 am
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| Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Poor Snape. Harry could make anybody crazy let alone anyone who is supposed to keep him safe. Enjoyed this chapter too
| Title: Mr. Diggory, The Quill, And Severus Snape
| 09 Dec 2022 3:17 am
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| Reviewer: Shell (Signed)
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I’m so proud of Harry right now, though I’m worried about what Umbridge is going to do in retaliation.
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| 09 Dec 2022 3:16 am
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| Reviewer: Shell (Signed)
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I’m so proud of Harry right now, though I’m worried about what Umbridge is going to do in retaliation.
| Title: Mr. Diggory, The Quill, And Severus Snape
| 09 Dec 2022 1:44 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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This was a wonderfully long and enjoyable chapter! Thanks so much for all of these chapter gifts. The scene in the first half was incredibly touching. I love the thoughtful and meaningful way in which the dressing down (so to speak) occurred. I think that Harry’s presence, though undoubtedly difficult for him, made it more impactful. I can’t say that Harry’s idea in the second half of the chapter was a great one, but it definitely fits with his self-sacrificing nature. Hopefully, Snape can help him to learn to value himself more. I love all the moments that are causing Harry to reflect on Snape’s changed attitude and behavior. I, too, love the direction that this is all headed in!
And regarding your response to my last review, yes please, I would really love to see the AI images of the other potions gatherings that took place (especially as it sounds like they were in a variety of different settings). I really loved that concept and imagery. Thanks so much again for your amazing updates.
| Title: Mr. Diggory, The Quill, And Severus Snape
| 09 Dec 2022 12:13 am
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| Reviewer: Ms_Prongs (Signed)
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That scene with Mr. Diggory and the Hufflepuffs had me in tears along with Harry. Bullying of any kind is so hard to go through - I know from experience growing up how it can hurt you, down to your soul.
I love the way Harry handled the Quill, and the way that Severus reacted (almost like a worried parent) made me grin like an idiot. Severus calling Harry by name, instead of Potter made me giddy as well. Goodness but I love where this is going.
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