Potions and Snitches
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Title: Mr. Diggory, The Quill, And Severus Snape 30 Dec 2022 2:02 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Way to go Harry! Lovely way to stop Umbridge. Thank you for updating
Title: A New Opportunity 30 Dec 2022 9:22 am
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m really enjoying this.
Title: A New Opportunity 29 Dec 2022 7:16 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoo hoo! I’m so happy that you’re back with more on this terrific story. Thanks for the wonderfully long chapter. I loved learning about covens and the experience there was super fun. It was a great contrast to see Master Eadmond’s style and see that maybe Snape isn’t the only strict potions master out there! Seeing Harry reverse roles with the other apprentices at the end felt like a really big step in his development as an apprentice. I hope that Neville does step up, as the chapter end so nicely tees up. On a more subtle level, it almost feels like Harry can just be himself more now that Snape knows about his true background and is being more patient and open towards him. Thanks again for this wonderful update in your totally fascinating story.

    Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it!  I worry sometimes that people only want the Snape and Harry moments and find the rest to be boring.
Title: Mr. Diggory, The Quill, And Severus Snape 10 Dec 2022 6:14 am
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Snape. Harry could make anybody crazy let alone anyone who is supposed to keep him safe. Enjoyed this chapter too
Title: Community 10 Dec 2022 3:57 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm, can I have a Christmas like that? :)
Title: Mr. Diggory, The Quill, And Severus Snape 09 Dec 2022 3:17 am
Reviewer: Shell (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m so proud of Harry right now, though I’m worried about what Umbridge is going to do in retaliation.
Title: Mr. Diggory, The Quill, And Severus Snape 09 Dec 2022 3:16 am
Reviewer: Shell (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m so proud of Harry right now, though I’m worried about what Umbridge is going to do in retaliation.
Title: Mr. Diggory, The Quill, And Severus Snape 09 Dec 2022 1:44 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a wonderfully long and enjoyable chapter! Thanks so much for all of these chapter gifts. The scene in the first half was incredibly touching. I love the thoughtful and meaningful way in which the dressing down (so to speak) occurred. I think that Harry’s presence, though undoubtedly difficult for him, made it more impactful. I can’t say that Harry’s idea in the second half of the chapter was a great one, but it definitely fits with his self-sacrificing nature. Hopefully, Snape can help him to learn to value himself more. I love all the moments that are causing Harry to reflect on Snape’s changed attitude and behavior. I, too, love the direction that this is all headed in!

    And regarding your response to my last review, yes please, I would really love to see the AI images of the other potions gatherings that took place (especially as it sounds like they were in a variety of different settings). I really loved that concept and imagery. Thanks so much again for your amazing updates.
Title: Community 09 Dec 2022 1:29 am
Reviewer: Shell (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed the images that you created to go along with this chapter. I love how thoughtful Snape is being about Christmas for Harry.
Title: Mr. Diggory, The Quill, And Severus Snape 09 Dec 2022 12:13 am
Reviewer: Ms_Prongs (Signed) [Report This]
    That scene with Mr. Diggory and the Hufflepuffs had me in tears along with Harry. Bullying of any kind is so hard to go through - I know from experience growing up how it can hurt you, down to your soul.

    I love the way Harry handled the Quill, and the way that Severus reacted (almost like a worried parent) made me grin like an idiot. Severus calling Harry by name, instead of Potter made me giddy as well. Goodness but I love where this is going.

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