| Title: Give And Take
| 08 Dec 2022 12:03 am
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| Reviewer: Shell (Signed)
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I really like the librarian in this story. I am so glad that she was there for Harry. I also like that the people on Snape’s Street are looking out for Harry.
Finally, Snape is getting with the program! I can’t wait to see what happens next.
| Title: Give And Take
| 08 Dec 2022 12:03 am
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| Reviewer: Shell (Signed)
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I really like the librarian in this story. I am so glad that she was there for Harry. I also like that the people on Snape’s Street are looking out for Harry.
Finally, Snape is getting with the program! I can’t wait to see what happens next.
Nicely written conversation between Harry and Severus.
Nicely written conversation between Harry and Severus.
I liked how Harry is finally realizing how much Snape is doing for him. Nice community that takes care not only its own but also muggles, and I'm glad Snape participates. Snape faces an interesting dilemma - hopefully it will occur to him to ask Harry what he wants.
I liked how Harry is finally realizing how much Snape is doing for him. Nice community that takes care not only its own but also muggles, and I'm glad Snape participates. Snape faces an interesting dilemma - hopefully it will occur to him to ask Harry what he wants.
I liked how Harry is finally realizing how much Snape is doing for him. Nice community that takes care not only its own but also muggles, and I'm glad Snape participates. Snape faces an interesting dilemma - hopefully it will occur to him to ask Harry what he wants.
I liked how Harry is finally realizing how much Snape is doing for him. Nice community that takes care not only its own but also muggles, and I'm glad Snape participates. Snape faces an interesting dilemma - hopefully it will occur to him to ask Harry what he wants.
| Title: New Duties
| 07 Dec 2022 4:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you. Oh dear Severus is so blind I want to shake him! I hope Severus comes and sees just what Harry’s Christmas will be like.
The first difficult conversation choked me up in a way that stories rarely do. It was beautiful, raw, poignant, and deeply needed. I’ve never seen that particular pairing for a conversation navigated with such tenderness and care. Harry’s revelation felt natural in the aftermath of that conversation and from the alternate aunt that he’s been dreaming of throughout the story. Snape’s change feels natural as well and I hope that Harry can learn to open up to him, given how he’s used to hiding his pain and difficulties. I was so focused on getting to this point that I find myself wondering how far you will take this story from here. My hope is that there is much left to come for the development of their relationship, Harry’s trust, Harry and Neville’s project and partnership, and Harry’s growth in potions and harvesting knowledge. I look forward to seeing how this all plays out. Thanks so very much for these amazing updates!
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