Definitely worth another read.
Definitely worth another read.
Awwwwwww. That is so SAD.... poor Harry!!! Aww, I don't even know what else to say about this chapter. The little girl gets cared after by Snape and not even Harry. Sniff.
Hi. I have a funny feeling I've read this before, but whatever - clearly it's good. I like the way Snape and Harry don't get all bonded at the end - it's more realistic.
Hi. I have a funny feeling I've read this before, but whatever - clearly it's good. I like the way Snape and Harry don't get all bonded at the end - it's more realistic.
I like the choice of words you keep using: like, 'but when he did Gryffindor’s standing dropped rather significantly.' And the idea of Harry seeing Snape being caring was a good one.
'Severus was very good at believing what he wanted to believe.' Love that last line particularly! This is looking to be a really good story! (: I love the humour with Snape too - the potter dummies for instance.
I really liked this! I look forward to reading your other stories, too!
Wow--great premise! I like your set-up very much! I'm looking forward to more of this story!
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