Oh dear. Poor Harry! I like the skip back to see how Harry became what he is in this chapter, even if we aren't sure from 1994 despite the author note and the premise of the first few paragraphs.
Oh dear, this was totally heartbreaking. It’s interesting to get the perspective that we do from Harry and what he’s experiencing. It’s a breath of fresh smoke to recall the later events depicted in the first chapter. I’m thoroughly intrigued by your tale.
This was a gripping and unique start. I read it with bated breath, eager to find out what’s going on. I love your offbeat interpretation of “Friendly Fire”. Terrific start to your story.
Nooooooooooooo! How horrible! I’m guessing it’s not going to get better any time soon.
Author's Response: If anything, I am consistent in my horrible-ness to the characters in my fics.
Poor Harry! I can’t wait to see where this is going.
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