Yikes! Snape really lost control. That's bad. He must feel terrible too.
Umbridge is such a creep.
I'm glad that Ron made up with Harry and Hermione. Harry needs both of them.
What a stressful chapter. I hope they can get through this. If they can't, Harry will die.
| Title: Occlumency
| 13 Mar 2023 5:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Mau (Signed)
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Pobre Harry y su trasero Snape se pasó
Espero que mejore la situación
That was an emotionally packed chapter for Harry and Snape. You wrote the scene so well! I’m glad to hear that was the low point, and things will get better from here. Thanks for the great chapter.
That was a dreadful punishment. Did Potter's father, and that mutt actually do that?
Ouch...
The dialog is so fun and clever. This made me laugh:
Ron looked mortified by this list but he pressed on and said, “I…like Hermione.” He closed his eyes and his ears turned red.
“Well I like her too.” Harry said, shrugging, “she’s our friend, she—ooohhh, you LIKE her.” Harry smiled.
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