| Title: Minerva McGonagall is a Good Friend
| 22 Mar 2023 12:15 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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This was a terrific chapter! I loved the last part, which was so nicely done, and also enjoyed seeing things from McGonagall’s perspective.
Great chapter! I love the conversations with Minnie!
Yikes! Snape really lost control. That's bad. He must feel terrible too.
Umbridge is such a creep.
I'm glad that Ron made up with Harry and Hermione. Harry needs both of them.
What a stressful chapter. I hope they can get through this. If they can't, Harry will die.
So Snape and Sirius had words. I think maybe they hashed it out and Sirius is less blood thirsty. We'll see. What is Snape's flat for?
Great development in this chapter and story. Dumbledore's right, they don't have to be enemies. The potion is the enemy.
Ugh Umbridge is the worst. It looks like Harry is going to met the blood quill on top of the discipline with Snape. What an awful year for him. I hope Ron shapes up and gets over whatever is going on with him.
i'm loving your Sirius. Very in character. Great chapter.
Ugh Umbridge is the worst. It looks like Harry is going to met the blood quill on top of the discipline with Snape. What an awful year for him. I hope Ron shapes up and gets over whatever is going on with him.
i'm loving your Sirius. Very in character. Great chapter.
Awww, poor Harry. He got what Snape thought he deserved. Of course Malfoy started it, I wonder if Malfoy also put something in Harry's cauldron to mess it up.
Hermione's a good friend. Harry's lucky to have her.
Great chapter. I'm loving this story.
| Title: Occlumency
| 13 Mar 2023 5:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Mau (Signed)
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Pobre Harry y su trasero Snape se pasó
Espero que mejore la situación
That was an emotionally packed chapter for Harry and Snape. You wrote the scene so well! I’m glad to hear that was the low point, and things will get better from here. Thanks for the great chapter.
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