That was a dreadful punishment. Did Potter's father, and that mutt actually do that?
Ouch...
The dialog is so fun and clever. This made me laugh:
Ron looked mortified by this list but he pressed on and said, “I…like Hermione.” He closed his eyes and his ears turned red.
“Well I like her too.” Harry said, shrugging, “she’s our friend, she—ooohhh, you LIKE her.” Harry smiled.
Well Sirius and Snape didn’t kill each other, that is progress…
I cannot wait for the next chapter. I would have chosen the spankings myself, as I do like my limbs, and not having scars burned into my skin, however, would certain actions require it? If Potter were to mess up badly enough, would he need a more severe punishment, such as branding or amputation? I would choose branding if I were forced to.
This was a nice, long chapter! I like the way you’ve captured both Harry and Snape’s feelings about all of this.
Yay! Another great chapter. I love the dynamics between characters.
Snape-Black interactions area always fun.
I personally never received any such physical punishments from Professor Snape in my time at Hogwarts, but my two mates said they had.
Author's Response: You're lucky, Draco...but then again everyone knows you were Snape's favorite student!
Enjoyable chapter! I wonder why Ron is so upset with Harry. Though it’s Ron, so I shouldn’t be all too surprised. Thanks for updating!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Yes what indeed is going on with Ron?
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
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