| Title: CH 39: Silver and Gold
| 26 Mar 2023 10:16 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I think Draco is very IC at the moment. Poor Neville I hope they find some of the missing soon. Thank you for all the updates.
Author's Response: Draco definitely has his moments in this story, but also a well-needed character growth.
| Title: CH 38: Distorted Shadows
| 26 Mar 2023 9:42 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very powerful. I like Severus’s introspection, it makes me realise how he had to keep his own wishes in abeyance during his 16 years as a spy.
Author's Response: Sixteen years of abiding by everyone's wishes, and yet pushing away his own. So sad that he never got to live the life that he wanted.
| Title: CH 37: Wish
| 25 Mar 2023 10:15 pm
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Thank you a very exciting battle scene. Very interesting how you see post war Severus
Author's Response: Thank you so much! 😊
| Title: CH 36: A Time for Healing
| 25 Mar 2023 6:53 pm
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Thank you I loved beans, earthworm is the worst I e heard!
Author's Response: It's definitely very unpleasent 😂
I’m glad that Harry took those hot-headed Gryffindors down a peg. Snape has great forbearance to be able to handle the vitriol after everything he has sacrificed.
Author's Response: Harry putting them in their place was satisfying! =)
Oh my, what a cliffhanger chapter end. I really liked the conversation between Harry and Snape.
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
I really appreciate the Snape POV. It lends a helpful insight into what’s motivating Snape and how he’s feeling. This story is a compelling read!
Author's Response: I never planned for them originally, but they just....worked. And I REALLy enjoyed delving into his mind, so you will find many more Severus POV chapters in this story.
The action scenes were terrific! Harry’s emotional challenges are so well captured. Luna and Hermione are wonderful friends.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Harry and Hermione’s realization in the library was absolutely beautiful. It casts everything in such a wonderfully different light.
Author's Response: It does <3 I always wondered what would have happened if they discovered this far sooner.
This was a sad, but moving chapter. It’s nice to see so many of the DA members back together, despite the heavy losses.
Author's Response: Thank you <3
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