| Title: CH 28: A Rocky Pursuit
| 24 Feb 2023 10:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for a great chapter. It must be difficult to write an action chapter as there are so many people to control and the action itself. Well done it was clear, exciting and well written
Author's Response: It took a LOT of planning for it to all come together. Keeping track of where everyone else was, and what they were doing, was challenging!
Whew! That was intense...
Author's Response: It's a little nuts! hehe!
Nicely written skirmish.
Author's Response: Skirmish! Hehe, I love that! And thank you - it was fun, and a bit of a nightmare to plan.
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