Oh my, what a cliffhanger chapter end. I really liked the conversation between Harry and Snape.
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
I really appreciate the Snape POV. It lends a helpful insight into what’s motivating Snape and how he’s feeling. This story is a compelling read!
Author's Response: I never planned for them originally, but they just....worked. And I REALLy enjoyed delving into his mind, so you will find many more Severus POV chapters in this story.
The action scenes were terrific! Harry’s emotional challenges are so well captured. Luna and Hermione are wonderful friends.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Harry and Hermione’s realization in the library was absolutely beautiful. It casts everything in such a wonderfully different light.
Author's Response: It does <3 I always wondered what would have happened if they discovered this far sooner.
This was a sad, but moving chapter. It’s nice to see so many of the DA members back together, despite the heavy losses.
Author's Response: Thank you <3
| Title: CH 10: Back Within the Shadows
| 09 Mar 2023 1:49 am
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This was a nice exchange with Narcissa and Draco. I’m looking forward to seeing Draco step up and do what’s right.
Author's Response: Draco is going to have a very important role/character development in this story <3
| Title: CH 35: Crimson Sky
| 07 Mar 2023 5:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very powerful and moving thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you <3
| Title: CH 34: Ode to the Fallen
| 07 Mar 2023 4:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very moving memorial service.
Author's Response: Thank you <3 That was a sad one to write.
| Title: CH 9: Into the Forest Again
| 06 Mar 2023 2:13 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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This was a thrilling chapter. Ron’s use of the deluminator was brilliant. Great use of it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted that object to be of use again, and not forgotten
Great dialogue between Harry and Snape. I like seeing his more compassionate side, even as he’s remaining up front with Harry. I hope that Harry doesn’t do anything rash!
Author's Response: Severus is so fun to write <3 Especially in a post-War world. Their scenes together will always be my favourite.
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