Ooh, great beginning, I liked how emotionally you wrote Harry's 'death' too, very gripping reading ^^
have fun x
Interesting (albeit a little confusing at this point!) start. I look forward to reading more.
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| 01 Sep 2008 9:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Neenee (Anonymous)
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Great work! Looking forward to more!
For the love of Merlin, UPDATE!!!, Please. I am desperate. I love this fic.
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| 18 Jun 2006 7:00 pm
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| 17 Jun 2006 7:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Cynthia1850 (Anonymous)
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This was an excellent start. Why did you quit writing?
This was a really good start. I realize it has been posted for a long while, but will you ever come back to it. I'd sure like to see what happens!!
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| 17 Mar 2006 5:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Owl of Descent (Anonymous)
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I like the beginning, the idea of the liquified AK was really unusual. I reccomend you get a beta- you got 'your' and 'you're' mixed up and 'coma' and 'comma' which is quite confusing. Not sure about Snape's rant being all in capslock but that's a format question and if you like it that's what matters.
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| 17 Mar 2006 2:45 am
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| Reviewer: Merry Sparrow (Anonymous)
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I love this. Is there going to be any more???
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