Interesting first chapter. I'm sure Snape wasn't expecting an apology from Harry for looking in his pensieve. Maybe he will start to view Harry a little more favorably now.
Wow, this is getting really good! I am right interested to know what's going on... you know, you might like Secret of Slytherin. It has a lot of the same elements as your story. :)
You should definitely post the sequel here, especially if Snape still acts as a mentor to figure to Harry and Draco. I absolutely loved this story, it was amazing. I loved Harry and Draco and how Harry helped to stop the in-fighting with the Slytherins. I can't wait to see the sequel come out. If you don't post it on here where will you post it?
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