| Title: To the Edge of the Earth
| 30 Sep 2023 6:48 am
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| Reviewer: Lana (Signed)
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This was such a cool story. I really liked the characterizations and bucolic New Zealand setting.
So good to read this again.
I am very grateful for happy end! I was so afraid... Really very happy. :)
I'm new to this website. Surprisingly enough I haven't been here before. This story is my first, and I'm very glad because it was beautifully written. I'm only giving it a 9 instead only because of my personal preference that Harry and Severus have a good relationship at the end. But I also know that this was the perfect ending for them. I love how Helen ended up becoming human in the end. I did notice an earlier foreshadowing of that, so I wasn't really surprised. LOL
I look forward to reading more of your stories. Or just more of the stories here in general. (*^o^)a295;a340;(^-^*)
Hurrah! Great ending. Helen becomes a woman, Snape ends up with a wife and Voldemort is dead. Now all we have to do is have Maman forgive Severus. After the scene with Grandmother, I can't believe she wouldn't forgive him.
I wondered when Grandmother would come on the scene. You have done a great job building the suspense. The wounded Snape, Harry's defensive shield and Helen's attempt to get the wand to Severus really built the mood. Looking forward to more!
Wow. I hadn't expected that! Sirius really spilled the beans. I wonder if the rest of the family will follow Maman's lead or try to help Snape?
So the letter was a trap. At least they have Sirius to help defend them. Though Sev and Rona may not see that as an advantage. I liked the way you built the tension. Nothing yet but the night is coming with a storm. Severus is out in it with Solly. Looking forward to the next chapter!
I had wondered if Sirius would turn up. Rona certainly made her feelings about him clear. Now all he needs is for Helen to show up and do some damage.
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