| Title: Prologue
| 07 May 2005 7:03 am
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| Reviewer: Heather (Anonymous)
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Great beginning! very well written and intriguing.. do you by any chance read James Joyce? ;) Yeah for allusions! (Milton and joyce, should be interesting).
Author's Response: No, have to say I havent! But I shall try to find it - is Milton and joyce the name of a book by James Joyce or am I really off? :-) Thanks and keep on R&R ;-)
| Title: Greetings, lost child...
| 22 Apr 2005 12:23 am
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| Reviewer: Nicoletta (Anonymous)
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Wow, some powerful stuff here! I like the SS/OC thing. Its just more believable than the more frequent SS/LE thing, for me that is. Keep up the update!
Author's Response: Quite alot of the SS/LE things are quite good, cos from that chapter in HP5 in Snape's Pensieve, but I just felt like adding someone else in, plus that gives us 'ickle Haven!
| Title: Discoveries
| 03 Apr 2005 9:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Nicoletta (Anonymous)
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Hey good stuff! The transaction from happy Oliver and Haven to sudden 'death' was a bit abrupt I thought...but nothing majorly bad!
Keep it up!
Nico
Author's Response: Yeah, but I didnt know how else to work it. After I finish this perhaps I'll do an overall edit or something.
| Title: Discoveries
| 03 Apr 2005 8:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous)
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Um, definetly different. Not too bad though
Author's Response: thanks! How is it different tho? and to what?
| Title: A New Prophecy
| 10 Mar 2005 8:17 pm
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| Reviewer: Nicoletta (Anonymous)
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like to point out a harmless little error: why is it snowing in the middle of summer!???? lol!! the Prophecy is quite intense, good chapter, definitely! OC is coming right?
Author's Response: Ooops!!! Thanks for pointing that out! I'll change it now :) hehe thanks, yep, OC coming :)
| Title: GAH! Why Snape!?
| 25 Feb 2005 8:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Nicoletta (Anonymous)
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good start so far! You could have made the dream more detailed perhaps?I was a bit confused at first as to wots happening. Good Snape v Ron reactions! Eager for more.
Author's Response: hmm I thought the dream was a bit undetailed too. But I had wanted to make it surreal and dreamlike, but didnt know how to do italics...so...but new chapter is up!
| Title: Prologue
| 21 Feb 2005 7:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Nicoletta (Anonymous)
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This is a fab beginning, very mysterious and rich...cant wait for more!
Author's Response: thanks! just posted first chapter, go read it! :)
| Title: Prologue
| 20 Feb 2005 5:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous)
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Fascinating begining. Very curious and eager for more chapters
Author's Response: thank you! This is my first dab at HP fanfiction, hopefully it wont fall into all the old tracks and will be somewhat slightly original!
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