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Reviews For Lifebain
Title: Lifebain 31 Mar 2005 5:03 pm
Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Not the best story out there but cute for it's length. The idea of 'lifebane' was interesting though
Title: Lifebain 31 Mar 2005 4:43 pm
Reviewer: Elli (anthro_gal@y...com.au) (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi. I really liked this, you put a unique spin on everyone betraying Harry and then finding the truth. My only critique is for the ending. While I liked Harry accepting Snape as his father and vice verser, it seemed to happen to sudden. Harry was all forgiveness of Snape and Snape, whom had hated Harry to that moment was all loving. Also I thought Lilly's explanation that she and Snape "did it" was a little crude. Nevertheless, I think in the end the story worked quite well, loved Voldemort's reaction to Harry already having taken the potion. Hope to read more of your fics.

    Admin edit: Jan - Please don't list your e-mail in a review. There's no protection on the site for it. Thanks. :)
Title: Lifebain 31 Mar 2005 4:41 pm
Reviewer: Elli (anthro_gal@y...com.au) (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi. I really liked this, you put a unique spin on everyone betraying Harry and then finding the truth. My only critique is for the ending. While I liked Harry accepting Snape as his father and vice verser, it seemed to happen to sudden. Harry was all forgiveness of Snape and Snape, whom had hated Harry to that moment was all loving. Also I thought Lilly's explanation that she and Snape "did it" was a little crude. Nevertheless, I think in the end the story worked quite well, loved Voldemort's reaction to Harry already having taken the potion. Hope to read more of your fics.

    Admin edit: Jan - Please don't list your e-mail in a review. There's no protection on the site for it. Thanks. :)

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