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Reviews For Flames of Betrayal
Title: Thirty-One 01 Apr 2015 11:18 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked that Harry and Severus had some time together. It's good to see the group considering themselves all as family. It will be nice to add Tonks to the mix as well now that Moony is in the group.
Title: Thirty 01 Apr 2015 11:09 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder if the others at the meeting were coerced as well. Everyone who would have been an advocate for Harry was there except for Hermione.
Title: Twenty Nine 01 Apr 2015 10:54 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. I hadn't expected an angry wolf at the end of the ritual. I'm sure Harry and Severus didn't either. Good thing he didn't bite Snape.
Title: Twenty Eight 01 Apr 2015 10:33 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    It sounds like Harry and his band will be unbeatable. Now that he has control of his magic, he can begin to make some plans.
Title: Twenty Seven 01 Apr 2015 10:21 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder what memories Harry is protecting for Remus? I know our heroes are shocked by the pensieve memories but I'm not sure they could be considered proof. There doesn't seem to be any evidence just to substantiate the memory they saw.
Title: Twenty Six 01 Apr 2015 5:11 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Aha. Now we know what the mysterious pensieves contained. I wonder if Harry will decide to join forces with the Watchers now?
Title: Twenty Five 01 Apr 2015 5:02 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    The meeting was interesting. I had wondered what was in the pensieves that Harry took from the vault.
Title: Twenty-Four 01 Apr 2015 3:04 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    It sounds like Hermione needs to get out of Hogwarts. She is bound to be on Dumbledore's list after the incident in the infirmary. Though I doubt that Harry and Ron will want anything to do with her.
Title: Twenty Three 01 Apr 2015 2:54 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I suppose that Hermione will tell Dumbledore that she saw Ron. Imagine her shock when he loses his temper about it and takes it out on her. Scary Dobby was a nice touch. Severus still has the upper hand on scary though and knows how to deal with him.
Title: Twenty Two 01 Apr 2015 2:41 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I hadn't expected Hermione to show up. I wonder if her opinion of the Headmaster has changed after Snape's little parting gifts?

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