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Reviews For Antiquity's Corollary
I love the potion that you came up with. It's really kind of funny how it needs to have the blood of his father... that must be a death eatter. So wonderful that they have both. I find that makes me smile! Oh and Snape's comments earlier in the chapter... His sarcasm- that was great too! About your question, to bring Lily back. That depends on how you do it. Like you said, the "never died" and "back from the dead" seems like and obvious no. But I bet your "in a sense" could really come out nicely. Perhaps your Lily's room, with the light magic could be of use (maybe you're heading in that direction already). Like they can restore the room and maybe some of her essance is saved, a bit of her spirit... and they can talk to her there, like as a ghost, but not a ghost...hhhmmm a memory. Something that couldn't leave the room... Author's Response: Well Snape was fitting the details to the situation- I'm working on the actual "textbook" information. You'll see later in the story (probably during their summer, where we will delve more into defeating Voldemort, and the potion and whatnot) what the exact details of the potion were. The text doesn't actually say "Death Eater". I think you can get a better idea of how it works when Hermione discusses it with Snape in a later chapter... I want to say it's the chapter called "In the Blood" but I could be wrong. On the Lily issue... I've decided from here on out, mum's the word, from me ;) This could mean I've gone with either decision, or that I've got two endings that I'm deciding between. Don't get excited, lol.
okay this was a good story but now im at the end of what youve writen update soon!!! lots of love, platonic of course Author's Response: Sorry- I have updated, but it's a bit late. |
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