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Title: White Magic 26 Jun 2013 2:31 am
Reviewer: xikum (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I cannot really blame Harry for not having told Snape sooner - his train of thought really did make sense, given the nature of their (mis)communication with each other! Well written! I hope that Severus can understand that, and does not hold Harry soley responsible for this situation.
Title: White Magic 25 Oct 2012 6:22 am
Reviewer: Slegend (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! That conversation between Harry and Severus was so intense! Also really liked the "white magic" scene. Very good!

    Author's Response: Oh thank you :) I am glad you liked it, it has been a long time coming!
Title: White Magic 14 Sep 2012 12:39 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for efforts with this chapter. I liked the way you kept their emotions in such circumstances the pain came through much more strongly then if they were shouting and screaming and that made the tension very tight.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, I really appreciate it. I try to allow the characters to speak through more than just their words, which can be difficult to do in prose. I am glad it came across the way I intended :) 

    Thank you again for reviewing! 

Title: White Magic 12 Sep 2012 1:48 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow what an eventful chapter! And I can certainly tell that you've spent so much time and love into this piece. Trust me, it shows! :)

    Author's Response:

    Well, thank you very much. I am glad that it shows. I know it is frustrating to many readers the amount of time I've spent on this story, but while I have needed to set it aside at times in order to cope with the stresses of real life, I also have come too far to leave it incomplete. I do love writing this and if I could collect a paycheck for it I would write all the time! Haha. 

    Thank you for reviewing :) 

Title: White Magic 11 Sep 2012 8:03 pm
Reviewer: DevonShard (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this chapter. I have to wonder if Harry is going to find out about the letter from Snape or from Hermione when they get back. I can't wait for the next chapter and look forward to it.

    Author's Response: Haha, sorry for the suspense! I'm excited to write this upcoming chapter. I will try not to make it too long a wait. Thank you for reviewing :)
Title: White Magic 11 Sep 2012 3:15 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter as usual GBF. I especially loved the White Magic scene and the back story of Lily. Very well done, and so credible.

    Oh dear. Harry, you are giving Severus grey hair!! LOL. Snape is actually restraining himself very well, even though it sounds as though he is close to popping a blood vessel in doing so! LOL

    Oh no! Poor Tibby. Snape was a little rough on her. I have a feeling that he'll be descending upon Ron and Harry, now that he's finshed putting Harry through the wringer.

    Great job. I can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you- the White Magic scene has been something that has been in my mind for quite some time, so I'm glad it managed to come together for you. With Tibby- yes, Severus can be a bit callous when he has a purpose in mind. Poor elf.

    As to Severus' grey hair, lets hope not! Those black locks are his signature look :)

    Thanks as always for the review! 


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