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Title: The Tendencies of a Father 21 May 2007 2:16 am
Reviewer: Delaine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow. Great chapter. I loved that little paradigm shift at the end for Harry. Nice work.
Title: The Tendencies of a Father 10 Sep 2006 4:17 am
Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) [Report This]

    I figured something out. I just love your conversations. They're wonderful. Snape's little sarcastic speech about Harry needing to learn Occlumancy and then Harry matching the sarcasm. Oh and I liked how Harry refused Dumbledore. His line after Dumbledore's inner eye comment: "I don’t think that’s quite what you’re sensing.”-- that was cool. So now I'm really jealous of you, because your conversations are awesome.

    Oh and I loved how you had Snape slip into the fatherly roll. He finds out Harry's getting away with something he shouldn't and now he suddenly feels obligated to make things right. Lol. Well I suppose that would do it for Snape.



    Author's Response:

    Haha... you just figured this out... *snicker*

    Yeah, I think Dumbledore needed to be refused. I think Harry went about it all the wrong way, but I think it's great that he stood up for himself, you know? He needs to start taking control of his own life.


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