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Reviews For Antiquity's Corollary
Author's Response: Lol, actually, you're really not almost up to the new updates--the chapters start getting a lot longer in the 30s. by word count, you're not even half way done... *blushes*. Sorry, hated to burst your bubble there. But by all means, keep pluggin along! As for Harry's wand, I figure that since at this point, Voldemort still thinks Snape is spying on Dumbledore for him, he would have allowed him to retrieve the wand as another way to convince Dumbledore that Snape is loyal. That would be a good thing to include, actually. As for Hagrid's accent- I cannot tell you how much I dread writing him, merely for the fact that it is difficult to get that accent down. I always have to sit here with a book in front of me for reference. Thanks so much for your review, as well as for the ones before this! ~Gonnabe
Another good ending to a chapter! So I'd say it's a trend... I liked the start of Moody's lecture. After Snape and Moody's little fight. He said something like "Dark Wizards are all around..." And that part made me laugh. Oh and I really liked the Snape/Harry conversation at the begining of the chapter. You did great at keeping them in character while breaking past their barriors (a little) so each could see the other in a true light for the first time. Oh and to highlight this "revelation"... the way you had Snape say "Good Night, Harry" that was pretty powerful all by itself. Is that the first time Snape called Harry by his first name? It feels like it... And, well, I really liked that part. Author's Response: Moody just all around makes me laugh... I can't take him seriously. Well, I can, but choose not to. Yes, if I recall correctly, that is the first time he calls him Harry. One of my awwwww moments. I love this part of the story, I so do... I so do. And now I have to go back to writing the current angst... lol.
Author's Response: mmmm... *smiles*... if you insist. I just added all the way up to chapter 35, so I'm hoping that makes up for the lack of updating. |
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