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Title: Friend or Foe	06 Oct 2019 7:22 pm
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)	[Report This]

I hate Ginny so much for what she did this chapter. She has absolutely no right to force herself into Harry's mission. He had no time to be worrying about her but she just pushes until he has no choice but to agree to bring her. And what exactly does she bring to the mission? She's not magically strong (like harry already is), has little knowledge that could be useful right now (she literally could've stayed behind and just told Dumbledore herself in like 10 minutes instead of the notes that might not even work.) This isn't me ranting at the author by the way, I just never liked the way Harry's so called friends always act as if he owes them, as if they have the right to know and be apart of everything involving him when in truth they have none. I'm just hoping that there's no Ginny/Harry relationship coming up

Title: Friend or Foe	11 Sep 2006 12:02 am
Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed)	[Report This]

Wow, this seems like a cruel cliffhanger! Lol. I don't recall when I first started reading your story, but I think it was after this!

I'm glad that you had them all take some precautions, but really this was a foolish thing for Harry to do. But alas, this is exactly a thing that Harry would do.

I liked Malfoy in this chapter. It's a good reminder that he's still a child. Like earlier on you have him all confident and now he's a cute frightened little thing.

Author's Response:
If I recall correctly, your first review on ff.net had to be after the first posting of 32 or 33... I could be wrong, though.
Well, in Harry's defense, if he listened to what everyone said all the time, he really would be little more than a puppet. Still, I agree- foolish! Especially after Snape told him specifically not to... the little cretin, I tell you.
Malfoy is an interesting character. Not my favorite of the lot, but definitely interesting... he's not as flat as everyone used to suspect he was.