Well seems moving Harry to Hogwarts wasn't such a good idea after all eh? I see what you mean when you said the plot would pick up...getting captured by Lucius certainly would do it. Although, you didn't mention him getting out of Azcaban (sp?), isn't he supposed to be in prison? Oh well. I liked what you picked for Lucius' animangus form, I never thought a large white bird could ever be creepy, but this one certainly was. Awesome descriptions!
Author's Response: (Azkaban)
Well, I figured it was implied, to be honest. This is not me being lazy- it's just that it's difficult to fit every bit of information in with the flow of the story. I suppose I could have incorporated it somewhere earlier... but I didn't. That might be something to include during the rewrite process, though, yes.