I'm impressed with the plan so far. Hopefully Kingsley won't be punished in Severus' place for letting Potter escape. It sounds like the only way to get Harry out though.
| Title: The Weight of the World
| 20 May 2007 8:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Delaine (Anonymous)
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Oh damn, this is so good. But isn't Kingsley going to be in trouble for letting Harry escape? Oh my.
Poor Harry, I hope he will be okay! lol, I already know he turns out okay, but from the description of his injuries... I still worry about him. It was cool how you had Lucius show up, the Dark Lord isn't so trusting after all eh? And I like the coin/portkey that brought us Kingsley. Oh and I really liked how you had Kingsley pose as Snape- and that you alude to the fact this isn't the first time. I love the idea that they've all been doing so many sneaky things without Voldemort noticing!
Author's Response: Kingsley has always struck me as the perfect person to do this sort of thing with Snape, if you want to theorize that he's more involved in the order than the books really imply. See, the way he is described reminds me of a friendlier, darker (in terms of skin tone, lol) version of Snape... I don't know, I just felt he was good. Also, he's one of the more serious people in the order, which makes me think Snape would be more likely to put up with him.
Author's Response: I forgot to add- I'm really glad you mentioned the Lucius thing. I had someone comment awhile ago that she didn't think Voldemort would trust Snape so much with this- and obviously, he doesn't. He trusts them both together, however, because he's too confident to think that they would have any sort of mutiny going on. Which, they don't, so I suppose he's right.
| Title: The Weight of the World
| 21 Jul 2005 5:47 am
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| Reviewer: Danielle (Anonymous)
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I am enjoying this fanfic. I am really curious as to where it is leading. It is well written.
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I certainly try for that.
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