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Reviews For Antiquity's Corollary
Otherwise a humdinger of a start...
I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!! See, now that wasn't too hard was it! It was well worth the wait, even though it was torture! ;) Your faithful fan! Dawn
Are you planning on updating soon? As for the story... I simply love it. I started reading it on Sunday June 22nd I believe and I fell in love with it and read it the whole way through. Severus and Harry's interaction is perfect but I would love to see a little more physical contact - an embrace or two. Now before you yell at me, I don't mean that they should suddenly change and become all cuddly - not at all; it would just be nice to have a little more physical contact. Oh and I would love to see Severus get overprotective of his boy! ::winks:: Update soon my dear. I am eagerly looking forward to more. Yours respectfully, Lady Julie Snape. Author's Response: I read this and I thought to myself, oh dear, my readers have realized: it's summer, I'm finished with school, and I have no more excuses. You'll be pleased to hear I've actually already got 7 pages written on chapter 43. I am currently in the process of rereading my own story-- sadly, I'm not above admitting that after having gone 10 months without updating, even I am a little rusty on the storyline. Hopefully I'll have finished reading soon and will be able to write the chapter as if I never missed a beat. I am so pleased to hear that you have been enjoying the story, and I will certainly take into account what you said about the physical contact. I do feel the need to explain myself a bit on this point. I rarely write in much physical contact, or even much fluff, between the two because i myself am not a very affectionate person, and I have logically deduced that if I am not, certainly Snape is no better. My own relationship with my family has been somewhat rocky over the years, though it is much better now that I'm older, and I have a very difficult time with physical affection even with people I'm very comfortable with. And I am much nicer than Severus Snape. I will, of course, bring the two even closer over time, but the way I see it, the upbringing Severus had is probably not one that would lead him to be an affectionate father later in life, especially toward a teenage boy that he never grew to love while he was still a child. The transition is bound to be difficult for both of them. Mind you I'm not yelling, of course. You're not the only person crying for more of the fluffy moments. I'm just explaining why I am sometimes hard pressed to write them. Thank you so much for your review, and hopefully you'll see a new chapter from me soon! ~Gonnabefamous
I can't help but be sad that in all this time, Snape hadn't gained maturity enough to see that even if it had been true, Lily had come to him, sad and remorseful - and all he had done was kick her out. I can easily understand his rage and hurt initially, but with time, one would have thought he would have gained some perspective - after all, he has made some egregious errors, and has been allowed to make up for them - for him to hold so tightly for so long to his anger, and then take it out on a child - well, that is just to very sad. Truly. Has he never really learned?
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