Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Preparation 04 Aug 2007 1:51 am
Reviewer: xikum (Signed) [Report This]
    I am really enjoying this fic - I had just discovered it, and was delighted to see that it is very long laready! I adore HP novels, especially when the author gets the characters' personalities so very like the are in canon - you have done marvelously! I think you also have done a great job with the situations and the dialog!
    Um... Your math is a bit off, though... 34x2=64, not 60 (Harry's) + 14 (Ron's), which = 74... I sure hope Madam Malkin didn't cheat the kids out of 10 Galleons!

    Author's Response:

    Lol, good call. I really do know how to do math, I promise! Thanks for pointing this out; I've fixed it now.

     

    As for the rest of your review, thank you so much. I'm really pleased that you think I've done a good job with the characters--that almost matters more to me than plot at times, just because really, I find the relationships and interactions much more important and enjoyable.

    Hope you continue to read and enjoy,

    ~Gonnabefamous

Title: An Unexpected Warning 18 Jul 2007 2:52 am
Reviewer: lilyqueen777 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow I love this story =]

    Author's Response:

    Thanks :)

    I'm glad you've enjoyed it!

Title: Teacher, Teacher 25 May 2007 11:02 am
Reviewer: Delaine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Finally caught up to your last chapter. This story is great and I can't wait for more. I'm sure you are gonnabefamous; you are an amazing writer.

    Cheers,
    Delaine

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much Delaine, and I apologize for not having responded sooner. The end of the school year has come and everything has been absolutely crazy, but I have so enjoyed all of your reviews.

     ~Gonnabefamous

Title: So From the Delves of a Troubled Mind 21 May 2007 4:23 am
Reviewer: Delaine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    For some reason I found that kind of funny, Harry hexing Snape. Maybe it was Severus' reaction.

    Author's Response:

    I want to thank you so much for all of your reviews; I really appreciate that you took the time to not only read through a majority of the story, but comment on all of it as well. It means a great deal to me =)

    ~Gonnabefamous

Title: A Time for Tea 21 May 2007 2:33 am
Reviewer: Delaine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The tension between Albus and Severus is very realistic. I liked the insertion of Firenze. I can't seem to stop reading this great story.
Title: The Tendencies of a Father 21 May 2007 2:16 am
Reviewer: Delaine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow. Great chapter. I loved that little paradigm shift at the end for Harry. Nice work.
Title: Subtle Threats 21 May 2007 1:56 am
Reviewer: Delaine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The argrument between Albus and Severus was very well written and very realistic. This is an amazing story. I am enjoying so much.
Title: Ultimatum 21 May 2007 1:35 am
Reviewer: Delaine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story RAWKS!
Title: Chain of Memories 21 May 2007 1:14 am
Reviewer: Delaine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I can't believe Albus would do that, but I loved the conversation between he and Severus.
Title: A Final Solution 21 May 2007 12:44 am
Reviewer: Delaine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This chapter was a bit confusing, but I was intrigued.

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