| Title: Control
| 22 Aug 2015 4:30 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a good chapter
Author's Response: Thanks!
I am so psyched that not only have you not abandoned this wonderful story, but that you have put a fresh face on the story by revising every chapter since the beginning, but then produce this new, awesome chapter.
I love , how, although Harry and Snape have struggled and still have a ways to go, have managed to always work harder to iron out their differences.
I am not surprised that Harry is again trying to handle all his problems on his own. This is particularly scary though, because what he is doing is so risky. Let's hope that he can learn to trust Snape to guide him.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Your writing has become even better and more mature. Great job. Can't wait for more.
| Title: Control
| 19 Aug 2015 1:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Danielle (Anonymous)
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please please please post more
Author's Response: I shall try! Thanks for your review :)
| Title: A Sickening Realization
| 20 Jul 2015 10:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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OH, I love the new ending of the chapter!!
I like finding out Dumbles' thoughts on the matter too.
Aw, poor Harry. Again...I love the changes. Wonder who the Order member is.
Oh, I love the twist on this as well. I love how you added little details here and there. Great job.
OOh, I love the changes in this chapter especially. I feel both their emotions and tempers reaching boiling point, even more so, than the original version.
Wow! I love this new edited version. Your writing has matured and gotten even better with time.
It has been awhile since I read the story, but I am pulled into it right away. I am very anxious to see the changes you've made in the next upcoming chapters.
| Title: Checkmate
| 19 May 2014 2:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Bananna (Anonymous)
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I just reread your story and found it to be just as wonerful and exciting as the first time. I really hope you finish it! It would be a shame not to...
So can't wait for another chapter. I need to know what happens next! Love the way that you have developed the Harry/Severus relationship. It is so unlike all other stories that i have read thus far. It is so realistic. I never thought that there would be an easy acceptance of their relationship and that they would have to really fight for it as well as continue to live their lives in the way that would insure their survival. I honestly don't read stories that aren't finished because it drives me crazy that i have no idea what is happening. But your is one of the select few that will keep me going this semester and i will look forward to all of your updates.
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