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Title: White Magic 11 Sep 2012 8:03 pm
Reviewer: DevonShard (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this chapter. I have to wonder if Harry is going to find out about the letter from Snape or from Hermione when they get back. I can't wait for the next chapter and look forward to it.

    Author's Response: Haha, sorry for the suspense! I'm excited to write this upcoming chapter. I will try not to make it too long a wait. Thank you for reviewing :)
Title: White Magic 11 Sep 2012 3:15 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter as usual GBF. I especially loved the White Magic scene and the back story of Lily. Very well done, and so credible.

    Oh dear. Harry, you are giving Severus grey hair!! LOL. Snape is actually restraining himself very well, even though it sounds as though he is close to popping a blood vessel in doing so! LOL

    Oh no! Poor Tibby. Snape was a little rough on her. I have a feeling that he'll be descending upon Ron and Harry, now that he's finshed putting Harry through the wringer.

    Great job. I can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you- the White Magic scene has been something that has been in my mind for quite some time, so I'm glad it managed to come together for you. With Tibby- yes, Severus can be a bit callous when he has a purpose in mind. Poor elf.

    As to Severus' grey hair, lets hope not! Those black locks are his signature look :)

    Thanks as always for the review! 

Title: Vindication 06 Sep 2012 7:12 am
Reviewer: DevonShard (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this. It's very amusing. I look forward to reading more.

    Author's Response: Thanks very much! I hope the next chapter is just as good.
Title: Vindication 01 Sep 2012 7:06 am
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story. Finally a little clearing of the air between the two. Loved the scene with Hermione falling asleep

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much, I hope you enjoy the next chapter :) 

Title: Vindication 26 Aug 2012 6:52 am
Reviewer: Slegend (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! That was the best chapter yet (I think!). I read it three times!

    You've got a really good momentum going keeping both interest with the plot, and the relationship between Harry and Severus. The balance you've got between the two is great! Loved every second of the chapter.

    I loved the part with Ron, Hermione, and Harry. struck me as funny for some reason. Cute interaction between the three of them with their bickering. lol

    Loved it! Loved it!

    Author's Response:

    *sigh of happiness*

    This is such a great review, I just read it 3 times. There's nothing that makes me happier than hearing these things! I've lost so much reader interest on this story, regrettably, because of how long it's been since I've updated (before these recent chapters, that is). I understand it, but it doesn't make it any easier. So, your feedback is so important and so greatly appreciated. Thank you! 

Title: Vindication 25 Aug 2012 4:31 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter as usual GBF and I can't believe that you've updated 3 times in a month. You are brilliant. What do you do? Speed write?

    Ooh, Harry, you and your dad just finally came to an understanding and you might be jeopardizing it all by keepint this secret from him.

    I am worried that Snape will be less than pleased to find out that Harry and his friends are putting themselves in danger and possibly putting in danger all that Snape has worked hard for.

    If Lucius or Draco catches on to the fact that they are being followed, this could put Hermione, Ron and Harry is danger! I am so worried for them.

    Can you imagine? Lucius would probably drag the three of them to Voldemort. At the very least, Snape would be furious to find out that once again, Harry is putting his plan at risk, and that is the 'best' scenrious that could happen. Harry could possibly be captured, tortured and killed.

    Oh, my heart is beating a million miles a minute. It's a good thing that I have a good heart!!! Reading your wonderful story is putting me on the edge of my seat!

    Oh, and gotta love Dumbles so-called 'not interfering'. LOL

    Cherries? That is so Dumbledore. He loves his sweets. Lemon Sherberts and such.

    Okay, so please update soon. I'm literaly on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what happens next.

    My favourite story! And I thought that it was to be abandoned. Imagine my surprise at 3 updates in a month! Great job. Can't wait for more.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, Dawn! I know, the outlook seemed so bleak for so long. However, I've always said--no matter how long it takes me, I WILL finish this story! 

     

Title: Snake in the Grass 22 Aug 2012 11:24 pm
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    am enjoying the story. I can't help but take Harry's side in this whole fiasco, although he may or may not be in the wrong.

    Author's Response:

    It's hard to tell who is wrong, I think. I can see both points of view in this situation. There's no perfect child and no perfect parent. Harry feels older than Severus sees him as. He has been trying to learn how to fit into this role of son, but the bottom line is, he's only capable of being the person he's been raised to be- and that person is the opposite of the average child. 

    Severus doesn't really know how to deal with misbehavior other than that of a student. He is so used to dealing with wayward teenagers this way, he doesn't see how he could be wrong to be so harsh. He just thinks he's doing what he's always done, and that seems adequate. It's going to take some convincing from others to see any other way.

    Thank you for reading and reviewing. :) 

Title: Snake in the Grass 21 Aug 2012 3:04 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow! Great chapter Rebecca.

    I feel bad for Harry, but he really picked the wrong way to get his father to listen to him. Snape regards respect above all else and Harry trying to dictate to him, or at least Snape viewing it that way, was totally the wrong approach for Harry to get his father to treat him as an adult.

    I just don't trust Kinnaird nor Malfoy. Hmmm...what are they up to? Curious, very curious.

    LOL Dumbles, gotta love the guy. But he just can't put anything over on Snape, and if Snape feels like he's being ganged up on, then he will never ease up on Harry.

    I just wonder how many frogs he has to gut, or cockroaches he has to dissect before he gives in. Harry really "is" a stubborn Gryffindor! LOL

    I just can't wait for the next chapter!!! I really hope that Harry apologises to his father and then maybe Snape will ease up on him a bit.

    Phew, great job Rebecca. Missed this story for so long. I'm just so glad that you're back, and make no mistake about it---you're back with a vengence!
Title: Snake in the Grass 20 Aug 2012 11:37 pm
Reviewer: xikum (Signed) [Report This]
    Dear Dumbledore hit the nail on the head. Though Severus has a point, so does Harry, and Harry is used to going his own way, not trusting authority figures to be acting in his best interest. At the same time, Severus is neither listening to/caring for Harry's POV, nor explaining his own. They are two very different creatures, and one cannot change a basic nature, only work with it - a point that seems entirely lost on Severus & Harry... yet Severus is an adult - one would think he should do better than he is!

    Author's Response:

    Dumbledore is quite wise, and yes, both parties have good points. One can't really expect Severus to just know how to be a Father to Harry. He has not had much of an example to follow, and all of his past experiences with children has been interacting with students. He doesn't think he is wrong because he is a creature of habit and he's always been a harsh teacher; he's got to grow into his role as a Father, but that's hard to do when Harry is nearing adulthood. He will have to figure out how to be a mentor, rather than a guardian, soon. 

    Thank you for reading and reviewing, I hope you enjoy the next update :)

Title: Baskets 10 Aug 2012 4:42 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant. Just one word. Brilliant.

    I am worried about what Harry intends to do! :O

    So happy that you've updated. I get these butterflies (good butterflies) everytime I see an update from you!! :)

    Can't wait for the next chappie!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much :)

    It always makes me so happy to see longtime readers returning to the story. I hoped you would still read this recent chapter. Every time I post, I fear how many readers I've lost since the last update. I'm so thankful you keep reading. 

     ~G 


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