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| Shellie [Contact]
| Better be Slytherin!
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| Michelle (female)
| Member since: 14 Jun 2007
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| I'm a reader, not a writer :) I enjoy crocheting, cross stitch and fanfiction as well as regular books. Nice to meet you! [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 1: The Other Side of Normal
| 02 Oct 2019
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Reviewer: Shellie (Signed)
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This writing contest is both good and bad. Good because we are getting some awesome stories out of it, including yours. Bad because every single one of them NEEDS to be more than a one shot. I congratulate you on successfully getting back into writing!
Author's Response: Thanks Shellie :-). It feels good to get back into it. I have started writing another chapter for my other story on here (Time to Choose), so I hope to have time to get that done soon and start on my submission for Round 2!
Hagrid finds a new hybrid and to Snape's horror, Harry is the best option for help.
Takes Place: 5th Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round One
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 01 Oct 2019 / 01 Oct 2019
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Hybrid
| 10 Oct 2019
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Reviewer: Shellie (Signed)
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This is a cute little story that definitely could become a cute BIG story! I hope you continue it after the contest is over. I LOVE the baby snakes and them sounding like babies. If you could fix the weird formatting, more people would people review your story. I just noticed I had to slide the bar over to the right to find the review box. Others may be having the same problem.
Author's Response: Thanks, Shellie. Jan_AQ managed to fix it for me. I enjoyed writing the different personalities for the three heads. I''m not sure about continuing it at this time, but I think it would be interesting to see the personalities of the basilisk head, the runespoor, and dun... dun... dun... the third head. Is it also basilisk? Runespoor? Or something else?
Five-year-old Harry has a delicious surprise for Severus, and Mr. Scarecrow is about to attend his first Halloween party ever. *Fic Submission for the first annual Tri-Writing Tournament. (Second Round)
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11)
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Two
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 20 Oct 2019 / 20 Oct 2019
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Harry's surprise
| 21 Oct 2019
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Reviewer: Shellie (Signed)
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Urgh, I disagree that it doesn't need warnings. Reminds me of the story my Mom tells when she made her Dad a cake as a child and used salt instead of sugar. There were a few other errors but that was the biggie. You have a way with words, my stomach turned just READING your descriptions of what he made! But you are right, its a cute story. My grandpa at a slice of the cake my Mom made too. :)
Author's Response: Hahaha~ I'm glad the reading experience was realistic enough to turn your stomach! I have had a few instances with strange culinary experiments myself, once as a child, I made a salad for my aunt and its main ingredients mostly consisted of onions, apples, cucumbers, tomatoes all chopped up, topped with a scary mixture of lemon/apple juice that had sugar AND salt in it and then served it leftover rice from my lunch...it was practically toxic :)
Thanks for reading and have a nice day!
P.S; went back and fixed any errors I could find, thank you!
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 31 Oct 2019
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Reviewer: Shellie (Signed)
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This story is really intriguing! I am looking forward to chapter 3. The photograph is an original idea I hadn't seen before.
Author's Response: Thank you! I think I might have stolen the idea from the girl imprisoned in a painting in Roald Dahl's "Witches" - I found it very scary.
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 02 Nov 2019
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Reviewer: Shellie (Signed)
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This is really cute! Unfortunately it seems like you could add a whole lot more to this. lol Unfortunate for you of course, not us. The title is even great.
Author's Response: Thanks, Shellie. I guess it could. I hadn't really thought beyond a one-shot but it seems you all have. LOL...... Thanks!
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 01 Nov 2019
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Reviewer: Shellie (Signed)
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This is off to a great start!
Title: Chapter 2: Healing
| 24 Jun 2020
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Reviewer: Shellie (Signed)
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You are an excellent writer. I am glad you are sharing your talent with us! This story begs to be made longer or at least to continue on from where you are. But it is complete as well.
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Annus novus
| 24 Jun 2020
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Reviewer: Shellie (Signed)
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This has a great start! I would like to see them realize though that the club needs to be open to anyone that wants to join. Considering its now part of the actual Defense class, its even more important.
No one on Privet Drive was surprised when the priest came to deliver last rights to the boy, but who was the strange man with the long white beard accompanying him? “Cancer” was what Agnes from Number 2 thought it was. “An eating disorder” was what Mary of Number 3 believed it to be. Whatever the case may be, Harry Potter had been taken to the hospital many times and was seen to only be getting worse.
Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts
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Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Out of Character Snape
Tags: Creature!fic, Disguised!Harry, New Identity!Harry, Physical Impairment, Slytherin!Harry, Vampire!Harry, Vampires
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 7: Sugar and Magic
| 24 Jun 2020
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Reviewer: Shellie (Signed)
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I LOVE medical stories, the more detailed the better. I would never have thought of combining it with vampires but it works well.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! Really truly, I am!
Harry's sent reeling when he learns that Professor Snape is his bio dad, and if that were all he had to deal with, he'd probably be all right, but he's got werewolves, escaped convicts, a stubborn Dark Lord, and his own inner demons to deal with. Starts third year. Rating mostly for violence. Story deals with mental health, bigotry and child abuse. See more tags in Story Notes (Some are big spoilers so beware).
Takes Place: 3rd Year, 4th summer, 4th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Loving
Tags: Werewolves
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Title: Chapter 14: Suspicion
| 22 Jul 2021
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Reviewer: Shellie (Signed)
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Too much to unpack here for a detailed review. The Sammy side story was interesting, too bad we don't have magic to show everyone for real! I am not transgender but it would make life so much easier. Looking forward to the next chapter! I swear I watch the scroll bar as I read to see how much further I have to go before I am at the end of the chapter. lol And yet am STILL disappointed when it ends!
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