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Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
| 13 Feb 2009
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Reviewer: omega13a (Signed)
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Snape staying at Dursley's house? That will be... interesting. Anyways, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks, I plan to! Snape knows the experience is likely to be . . . unpleasant, but he really wants to protect Harry however he can.
Title: Chapter 3: Understanding the Problem
| 28 Feb 2008
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Reviewer: omega13a (Signed)
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If you need someone to proof read your story, I can. All the authors I beta for have disappeared on me... :(
Author's Response: Yeah, >_> I have the tendincy to get slightly busy at times but I always let me beta know what's going on, if you wanna give it a whirl then message me on aim or yim, EmraldEyesAghara on aim and Dragon_Eyed_Redhead on yim. I'm on atm but I do have to head to bed in a little bit due to work.
AU. This is a Snape mentor Harry kind of story. It starts with Harry's summer vacation before his Second Year as Snape comes across something that breaks all delusions about the boy's home-life. Please don't flame. I really appreciate constructive criticism but no flames. Please!
Takes Place: 2nd summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 6
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Completed: No
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Updated: 01 May 2009 / 08 Nov 2007
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
| 04 Jan 2008
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Reviewer: omega13a (Signed)
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Good story. Please continue.
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 04 Jan 2008
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Reviewer: omega13a (Signed)
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Dumbledore backed into a corner by Snape and McGonagall. This should prove interesting... Anyways, keep up the good work!
Title: Chapter 10: Meeting The Potters
| 19 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: omega13a (Signed)
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In fandom, leave it up to Dumbledore to come up with birthday and Christmas presents for the young Boy-Who-Lived that people wouldn't approve of... Anyways, good story and keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Yup, after all, what is Dumbledore there for other than to infuriate characters and generally act like an overgrown child?! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Title: Chapter 21: I HAVE MANY IDEAS
| 07 Mar 2008
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Reviewer: omega13a (Signed)
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When is McGonagall going to find out about this forgotten house? I'm assuming its going to be before Harry starts his second first year of Hogwarts because you simply having the resorting warning and not the Slytherin!Harry warning...
Author's Response: No - later in the story. I don't need a Slytherin warning for this story ;-) Sorry, but I can't answer such questions... but I'm updating so fast that it won't take you long to find out :-)
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 07 Mar 2008
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Reviewer: omega13a (Signed)
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A nice start to your story. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Title: Fate's sense of irony
| 25 Feb 2009
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Reviewer: omega13a (Signed)
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I find it a little odd that Snape is being so rude to Harry. Snape must really be blind if he hasn't noticed certain things about Dudley unless he is unaware that Harry and Dudley are cousins and live in the same house...
Author's Response: Haha, yes. He is mean. I didnt mean for that to happen, but it just... Did. And the whole thing with the difference between Dudley and Harry will become an issue. It was actually supposed to come up a lot earlier, but the whole detention thing detered me.
When Vernon discovers Harry can't do magic during his first summer back from Hogwarts, he loses it when the cake falls on his clients. Completely AU version of the Severitus challenge beginning during the summer after first year.
Takes Place: 2nd summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Title: Chapter 7: Paradigm Shifts
| 08 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: omega13a (Signed)
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I want to see how Ron reacts to learning Snape is Harry's dad. Hurry up and write that! *is shot dead* Anyways, good story.
Title: Chapter 20: Loss of an Heir
| 24 Sep 2008
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Reviewer: omega13a (Signed)
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At least Draco will get a father that accepts him for who he is. Anyways, good chapter. However, I think it was foolish for Draco not to request a resorting given the attitude of the other Slytherins.
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