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I'm Moriyah, a 28 year old lover of words who discovered fanfiction at 14...14 years ago, dear Lord.  Though I love writing, procrastintaion and a tendancy to get wrapped up in work means that several stories have been on hold for years. Getting back into it is so difficult when you've been away. I'm currectly an Advanced EMT, Firefighter and on a Covid Taskforce in West Virginia while in Paramedic Class. This has been the busiest year of my life, and reminded me how much I missed the quiet joy of sharing what you love with others, in particular, stories. 

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The battle is over, Voldemort at last lays dead. And the Hero who brought it about fights against himself and fate for his life...

Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Apr 2007 / 19 Mar 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Fist of Fury 19 Jun 2008
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
    Ahh man, I love this story! Please update again, I REALLY want another chapter. Please? The characters are done woderfully!

Sequel to A Time and Place to Grow - After spending a summer with Snape, Harry begins his sixth year at Hogwarts. But Snape is keeping an eye and a firm hand on him, and a new teacher, split loyalties and a looming fight with the Dark Lord await Harry.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Violence
Chapters: 23 - Completed: No - Updated: 13 May 2010 / 02 Apr 2007
Series: A Time and a Place - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Faking 23 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
    Lol! I've never played sick before but after seeing Harry do it, well it sounds like fun! Perfect Snape, yeah.... right, no wonder Severus laughed! I like that Harry & Dracoo are getting along well. Or at least so far, wonder what Ron and Hermione are going to say about it! OoO! I think Snape would be pleased, Ron though...not so much. Great chapter! I look forward to more!
    Scorpia

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Sore 06 Jul 2008
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
    Draco! Yay, I luv my Draco, hehe. 'Lied, lied, lied - the man was a nasty, rotten, horrid lair.' I think you meant liar but I may be wrong, maybe calling someonee a lair is just some bad name that my parents have never let mer here? LOL, probably not. It was great! I have been looking forward to reading all your updates, :)

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - A DA Meeting 06 Jul 2008
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
    Wow! What a GREATchapter. Harry's speech during the DA meeting made me proud of him, lol. And hermione sugesting a picnic made me laugh out loud literally. It's great! I CAN NOT WAIT FOR MORE! Harry's line about levitating Draco's dead body still has me laughing when I think about it. He's brilliant. I adore the way you write him. The last part with Snape, leaving him gaping. That was bloody brilliant, I love surprising Snape. I can not wait to see if Harry and Draco kill each other--I mean, how well they get along, lol.

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Picnic 06 Jul 2008
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
    I smiled through the first part of the story, my face hurts now, lol. It was wondereful, I simply can not wait to read the next chapter so I'll go do that now!

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Loyal 06 Jul 2008
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
    I want more please! Please ma'am, may i have some more? Lol. There were a few mispelt words, said, stomach and another were spelt wrong just so you know. I enjoyed this a lot, thanks.

When Harry finds an injured Snape on his doorstep and must hide him from the Dursleys, he has no idea that this very, very bad day will be the start of something good.

Harry and Snape are thrown together by annoying relatives, a series of strange dreams, and Voldemort's latest hunt for Harry, but their greatest challenge may well be surviving each other. This will be a long summer unless the two can find a way to work together. A slow-burn enemy-to-mentor story.

Alternate 6th summer (and part of the school year): post-OotP; ignores HBP and DH.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 61 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Mar 2021 / 30 Apr 2007
Series: None - Challenges: Battered Snape for Breakfast
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Unexpected Visitor 15 Jan 2008
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
    I think Harry's response was very controlled. If I would have found somebody peering through my mail slot, there just might be a few people a couple hundred miles away that wouldn't hear me screaming. lol :)

    I like how you wrote the Dursleys. A lot of people write them as being totally horrible so much so that it's just not beleivable. Your way is belivable.

    Poor Harry! Getting that carpet clean is going to be a big pain in the you no what! Lol

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for your reviews, Scorpia!  I always get so excited when I get reviews from people starting at the beginning or re-reading my stories because it's like a special gift! :)

    Thanks for the insights!


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - An Inconvenient Conscience 15 Jan 2008
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
    Um, no Proffesor this is not the prison tower, this is my bedroom....chirp..chirp...

    Your way is better. Lol :)
    I am rereading the whole story. I have read it on fanfiction net and here but I like reading it here better because I can make the text bigger.

    I really like the scene were Harry is eating those canned peaches, Sluurrp! Lol

    Scorpia

    Author's Response: Yum...I'm getting a craving right now for canned peaches myself! LOL!

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Close Quarters 15 Jan 2008
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
    “This is my room. You get out.”

    I LOVE misunderstandings! There so fun add Harry and Snape and there that much better!

    Author's Response: Yes, misunderstandings are the spice of life. ;)  Or, okay, maybe the resolving of understandings is a little bit cooler...

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor 20 Jan 2008
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
    Your going to kill me Kirby! I'm going to be dead, dead, dead!
    Death by suspense. Whoever thought it couldn't happen was wrong, my dead body will be proof of it.

    I'll leave something for you in my will.

    Ok, enough with the weirdness, (grin) I loved this chapter! I squeled when I heard that you had updated. There might be a few people a few miles away who didn't here me. Lol. :)

    I loved how you explained Harry's fear and how Snape responded. Cool Snape, calm Snape. Hehe!

    Or calm most of the time his scream fest was very fun to read about. When tempers rise the readers will cheer!

    The Chapter end notes and when Harry was thinking to himself in this chapter had a lot of (if's) in it. I think I understood how Harry must have been feeling. Nothing is clear, anything can happen, may the force be with you. Lol, I really hope you will write a sequel after this one.

    Thank you for updating! I love it when I have new material to read. A new chapter from this story is better then chocalate!

    Well now you know what happens when I review late at night when I should be (yawn!) sleeping. I hope I didn't ramble to much, thanks for responding to my last review. Only a few authors do that and I really like to hear responses. Great chapter and great story. :)

    You make my life complete! :)
    Scorpia


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