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A Dilemma Solved? by Tragedy of Fenwick starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 79]
An alternate universe in which Harry decides not to cast Sectumsempra on Draco. Instead, the Potions Master walks in on Draco using the cruciatus on Harry! A response to Bratling's Cruciatus challenge.

Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Dec 2009 / 28 Nov 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Cruciatus
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 24 Jun 2017
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
    I really want to read the rest of this!

Of Scarlet and Emerald by autumnamberleaves starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 107]
A pair of shoes, a set of mittens. How are two seemingly mundane items going to change the lives of both a snarky man and a troubled child?

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic, Physical Impairment, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 03 Aug 2014 / 04 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: A Not so Peaceful Night 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
    The only two criticisms I have are this:

    Your story seems to jump back and forth from present to future, and that makes it a little confusing.

    Also, sometimes you have these huge, long paragraphs that really need to be broken up. Readers see a huge chunk of text and go, 'oh boy' because eyes don't like to look at so many words lumped together.

    Other than that your story is coming along nicely!

    Author's Response: Well, I'm sorry about that. It's actually a ton better than it was earlier so that's good. :-)

Title: Chapter 7: Weaving a Web of Despair 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
    Gryffindor: Scarlet shoes and emerald gloves

    Author's Response: Hi. Thanks for reading and reviewing...well, that's the reason for the title of the story but I was actually talking about the chapter..lol I'll have to go and see what I wrote. It was night when I wrote the question. :-)

Title: Chapter 1: Simple Gifts 23 May 2013
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
    That song always makes me cry when I hear it at Christmas. Interesting story so far!

Outcast's Alley by RhiannanT starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 287]
When Harry goes through some...changes...the summer before his Fifth year, his relatives don't react well. Suddenly Harry finds himself homeless and alone, and learning to cope with yet another whole new world he'd never known existed.

Takes Place: 6th summer, 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Creature!fic
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Parental Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Sep 2010 / 20 Dec 2009
Series: Outcast's Alley Series - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 11: Fairy 17 Jul 2010
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
    Very interesting. I'm glad you updated! If I were Harry/Tobias, I would definitely begin to miss my old life and friends, and my old bed and common room and house! Maybe have something about Harry really missing Gryffindor, even though he's enjoying Hufflepuff. I wonder if Harry's identity as Harry Potter will ever come out and what the school will do when they find out? Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you liked!!

Title: Chapter 12: Liar 29 Jul 2010
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
    Looove it. Just wondering, but where did you come up with the name Illatoby? I love it. What does it mean?

    Author's Response: Thanks!! So glad you like. Illtobe is a name purely out of my imagination. I wanted the shortened version to be 'Toby', but I didn't want him to be Tobias, for obvious reasons. I'd heard the name 'Tobe' before somewhere, and so just modified it to Illatobe. I like it, too. :0)

Title: Chapter 14: His Highness 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
    Love it! Can't wait for the next update! Can't wait to see what happens next! I'd still like to see Harry staying at Hogwarts, but have a feeling that this isn't where you're taking the story. Great work though, I am totally engaged in this original fic!

    Author's Response: Hehee. Glad you like!! (But my no says nuffing. My keeps secret!) :0) LOL don't ask. Thanks for the review!!

On a Christmas Eve by Ivy-Green starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Both Harry and Severus get what they really want for Christmas.

Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Fic Fests > #10 Holiday/Winter 2009
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Dec 2009 / 22 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: On a Christmas Eve 06 May 2012
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
    I didn't realize he'd charmed it. I thought it was a small modified pensieve from the description, with memories of Lily saying these things to Harry as a baby.

    Very good though!

Playing Pretend by watercrystals starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 76]
During their third year, Harry and Draco take their rivalry too far while in the Room of Requirement. As a result, a magical accident transports them to a make-believe world where they had grown up from toddlers and their caring father is...Severus Snape.
Desperate to get back to their own world, the boys try to get along and play the part, but to Snape nothing has changed. And what happens when they return to their rightful time and place?
Their illusionary adventure will have them realize the man that is capable of being family and cause them to form the friendship they hadn't thought possible to obtain.
Playing pretend is the one that starts it all: it's part 1 of 4 in the “Shifted Reality” series that will eventually have two boys and one man learning to be a family.

Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Sibling Addition
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 10 - Completed: No - Updated: 18 Nov 2010 / 21 Feb 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Shifting Focus 05 Jul 2012
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
    It's interesting so far. Sometimes you change back and forth between past and present tense though and it should stay one or the other.

Pen Pals by fairylights starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 40]
Severus Snape is a spy by nature and by training. As such it infuriates him when he realizes that he knows virtually nothing about the real Harry…other than the fact that Harry keeps a journal. Using his own invisibility cloak, Severus sneaks into the Gryffindor tower while the students are at the leaving feast and exchanges the journal's specially matched ever-sharp quill with a quill of his own that has been charmed to a parchment in Severus' possession so that everything Harry writes is copied to the parchment. What does Harry write, and what happens when Severus realizes that they are kindred spirits. 2010 Challenge Fest entry. Response to Pen Pals by dianehc.

Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > #11 Challenge Fest 2010, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 Jul 2010 / 13 Jul 2010
Series: None - Challenges: Pen Pals
Title: Chapter 1: Pen Pals 17 Jul 2010
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
    Loved it! I feel so bad for Harry though! But I do so love your writing style!


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